Tuesday, May 8, 2007

A1: "Police arrest man hiding in PV home"

Ken Hedler's barricade story suffers primarily from hasty writing and absent-minded editing. Beyond the usual kitchen-sink rundown of the police reports, Ken talked to some of the bystanders, and that's good, but the quote from Jim Gibbons, for example, makes no sense. The whole thing just feels slapdash.


leftturnclyde said...

wow there's a smell of something interesting goin on at the house on Rockland..How come Ken didnt checkitout?

Steven Ayres said...

You can only see so much from behind the police tape.